Dont read this until your read the first page ive written.

Jaymz went to the armory and Antonio went to recruiting."Hey Antonio, over". "What, over"? "I found some cool stuff in here, over". "Like what,over". "Like a shotgun, a pistol, some knives, and pepper spray,over". "Sweet, i found some ammo and some bulletproof vests down here, over". "Ok, lets meet up at the top floor where the broken skylight is, over". "Alright, over and out". After they get the stuff, they go to the top floor and give each other some equipment. Antonio gave Jaymz a vest and some shotgun shells. Jaymz gave Antonio the pistol, a few knives,and one of the cans of pepper spray he found. "Ok now we are suited up". "Yeah, now It's time to kick some zombie ass"!

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